My monitor is red saturated, so I want to look at this again at school. I very much like the use of color and balance in the flame and the lights hitting the M&Ms. It's this neat blend of romantic and childhood. It may be my monitor, but the flowers look a tad hot, which, if it is not my monitor, you can clean up in photoshop, because it looks like the detail is there. Like the backdrop, and wish I could see a hint of it on the left as well, just a hint, like in the top, left corner. I feel it is a bit centered from top to bottom - maybe more bottom weighted would work well. I think you might want to add some words, make it narrower to bottom weight it, and make it into an advertisement within your portfolio.
My monitor is red saturated, so I want to look at this again at school. I very much like the use of color and balance in the flame and the lights hitting the M&Ms. It's this neat blend of romantic and childhood. It may be my monitor, but the flowers look a tad hot, which, if it is not my monitor, you can clean up in photoshop, because it looks like the detail is there. Like the backdrop, and wish I could see a hint of it on the left as well, just a hint, like in the top, left corner. I feel it is a bit centered from top to bottom - maybe more bottom weighted would work well. I think you might want to add some words, make it narrower to bottom weight it, and make it into an advertisement within your portfolio.
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